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Chapter Ten gud fic. pls update. that's all you get until TR Salvage gets updated. Save me from doing pull-quotes on ffn. okay, okay, fine. The ego-smackdown I thought was going to happen last chapter happens this one, and Nate the Great definitely enjoyed...

Chapter 9 tee hee First gym battle! And also . . . penultimate gym battle? Glad you've joined the Skip The Badge-quest 2020 campaign! I'll be honest, I was expecting the child to lose. Their tactics of "just hit it with surf tho!!" leave something to be desired. But (I'm a cheater who's read...

Chapter 8 Well, let me preface this review by saying this chapter didn't feel long at all. The child/Nathaniel Morgan relationship begins to take shape and we're introduced to the child's full team. That kept me engaged from beginning to end. Liking the whole Nathaniel Morgan thing a lot more...

(Chapter 5) Actual footage of me reading this chapter: More actual footage of me reading this chapter: This was so tense. I was reading on mobile and inching down paragraph by paragraph, watching the proof that the child's future career is definitely not in theater, and watching poor Leonard...

(Chapter 4) Well that was . . . I see the child is definitely a member of the Good Decisions club. I was flinching during the whole break-down at Cinnabar. You captured the child's rising panic and inhuman reaction in a very visceral way. You do an excellent job keeping the child clearly...

(Chapter 3) Really enjoying seeing how the child interacts with the real world. I liked how you introduced Leonard Kerrigan and the whole idea that someone has noticed what the child is doing taking over dead bodies and using pokedexes. I can definitely see conflict on the horizon with this...

(Chapter 2) Talk about a difficult conversation! It was really intense to read. I like how both of them seem stuck, the child on the idea that it's Titan's trainer and so Titan has to obey, and Titan on the fact that no clearly you are not on my trainer. And since the child actually was Titan's...

Okay, I'm caught up on all my other reviews, so time to start on Salvage! The length sort of scared me in the past, but it's only up to chapter 10 on here which is nice and manageable. (Chapter 1) It's a really incredible opening chapter. I both have no idea what's going on and know...