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Oh man what an opening sequence. I love that this quote morphs from something so innocent to something so mysterious! This is a fantastic line. Did... Did Gen just cut a hole THROUGH a mystery dungeon?? Holy smokes that's wild! I didn't think it'd be possible to break out of a mystery dungeon...

Oh, I really like this as a way for Gen to show unease about his Oshawott form. I know there's been moments where he's uncomfortable with his anatomy being different than his human self, and missing his home, but for some reason this simple line here hit home the most. I'm also glad to see that...

:mewlulz: omg Acacia Had to do a double take here for a quick second. *Different* Gen. And gosh, I really hope this comes into play later that such a significant character in the PMD world shares a name with our protagonist :eyes: I don't know why but I assumed Carkoal *was* the train (or at...

Oh man, this hits twice as hard after the end of last chapter. Knowing Saltriv is also hurting inside. It's amazing that they're still so positive and supportive while struggling with their own issues. I'm proud of Saltriv for that strength of character, but also sad because they're hiding their...

Back to ES after a long break! Aaaand I have to admit, I have forgotten who Leviene and Ayeug are. They're some of the already proven human-turned pokemon heroes of this world, right? (I remember the chapter where they were introduced being A Lot with so many new characters, but I am also...

:eyes: (I'll come back to this later in the review but this is *very* intriguing) I love all this new info about shadowy pokemon and purification that I'm just as confused, intrigued, and terrified about as Gen. It's wild that this world has actually *lost* methods of purification, especially...

Oh man, another really intriguing opening to Chapter 6. I had a feeling it might be our missing Kecleon brother from the focus on items and selling items, and it was confirmed by the last section of the opener. How interesting that it seems like he was shadowified like Saltriv might have been...

Oh whoa, I was not expecting a cryptid arctozolt horror section but I am here for it. Love the way you write the Porygon-Z narration. What a fun (and intriguing) section to kick off Chapter 5! (I also realize that the setting of Overcast Village with the gray misty clouds is perfect for like, a...

Yellow and blue text?? Speaking to each other??? Is this who I think it is???? (V excited to get to know arctozolt more, especially with the HA campaign coming up soon.) I didn't expect to get to see them so soon in ES. And *very* intrigued that they know about Unova, and that they came from...

Hello hello! I'm here for our review exchange, and right off the bat I love how quickly the tone of the fic is set. There's a lot of mystery surrounding, well, everything! I'm enjoying how things are confusing and unnatural for both our protagonist and for the reader at the same time. Although...