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Ah, Chapter 7 is like a sigh of relief after the hold-your-breath action of the previous two. Not that it's particularly "happy", per se, but it's this calm after the storm, the reprieve after the rush of adrenaline. It's good pacing, and it lets not only the reader download and decompress...

Holy Cannoli! I realize I've read further ahead into OSAS and neglected to leave reviews in my wake, so a great backtrackening was in order, which is fine by me because I love a good re-read. This will cover the two chapters of Phenac fights that kick off the proper action of the plot. (I'll...

For the Smeargle Swap, I wanted to draw some down time with the gang where nothing is going wrong and everything is okay (unless you don't like espeon tail in your face). Things will probably stay this way the whole fic, and everyone will be happy, I'm sure of it.

Alright, Hello Hello! I'm here to dive into OSAS and I'm going to lump my thoughts for the first four chapters together, as I think they read as a solid opening "arc" or introduction to what we have going on in this fic. Also, I'm sure you've heard quite enough about the first chapter on its...