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Hey, thanks for coming back and reading chapter 2! Great! 👍 You are 100% correct! Don't worry, Pen did plenty of that already. :P Don't get me wrong, c/c is great and I feel fortunate to have gotten a detailed review that gives me a lot to think about for revision. But while c/c is extremely...

Hi Pen, Thank you for the detailed review! This gives me a lot of great points to work on for clarifying thought processes in the chapter and making them more internally consistent. I'll just answer a few questions that touch upon canon: Yes, it is a B2W2 difference. His team changes quite a...

Hi SinderellaWrites, thank you so much for your kind return review! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story, and thank you also for pointing out the places where my writing was repetitive, or where a little more information/warning was needed. I really appreciate that! This is one of my favorite...

Hi Dragonfree, Thanks so much for your in-depth review! You brought up a lot of great points for me to work on, and I really appreciate your willingness to read a genre that's not your usual cup of tea . . . also for pointing out all those sentence-level mistakes. (Goodness, there are so many...

Summary: A companion piece to the previous chapter. After Rosa's final confrontation with Team Plasma, and before his reunion with her, Colress reflects on his relationship with Ghetsis, and what it takes to find the truth. Slight Colress/Rosa. Genre: Angst, slight romance Content warnings...

Summary: Rosa is frozen in an ice crystal during Team Plasma's attack on Opelucid City. This was not part of Colress's plan, and he is determined to fix the situation—but in doing so, he forced to come to terms with feelings he would rather have kept hidden. Sequence of two related one-shots...