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Hey there, I am back to finish this story arc. I have a few sentence-level things, which I'll start with; after that, I'll try to focus on the big picture for this chapter. The "She wasn't safe. Yet she hit a dead end" doesn't quite flow; it would make more sense logically that she isn't safe...

Thanks so much for all the answers and explanations about the world that "I, Isobel" is set in! No worries, I'll just mentally file that part of the story away as Isobel wanting free food. ;) There's a lot of baggage when it comes to Pokemon-human romance, and I think part of the immediate...

Hello, I'm here from the Review Blitz reviewing chapters 1-2 of Act 1: Out of Hand. I came across this story and skimmed a little bit of chapter 1 several months ago, and it has been on my radar as something I wanted to R&R ever since then. Organizationally, I have some line-by-line...