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All right, finally caught up! I'll talk first about this chapter, then the fic overall so far at the end. Connor and Florence's escape from the Old Chateau brings us to the end of this little arc and is a natural place to take a quick break. For them and for readers as well! I enjoyed the...

Back to Connor and Florence's big, spooky misadventure! I really enjoyed Connor's weird nightmare/ghost hallucination/dread plate experience, and the haunted radio in particular. For some reason the radio broadcast being so almost normal, combined with the ghost-announcer seeming so apologetic...

Chapter Four! Or, "Connor goes into a sinister building and has an intense hallucinatory experience, take two." :P It was interesting how having someone else around to look out for him changed the dynamic here. Ronnie hasn't been a lot of help, obviously (poor Ronnie!), but Florence is naturally...

Chapter three! This is kind of a transitional chapter. Connor learns about the haunted mansion, he meets up with Florence, and then we cut off when they actually enter the haunted mansion--I imagine the next chapter's when shit's really going to go down. Will have to read on for a couple more...

All right, looks like Catnip is sending me back here a little early! I think I'd like to take this story one chapter at a time, so here's #2. The results of the psychic examination were curious. It sounds as though Connor remembers everything fine (or, like, as fine as can be expected after a...

Welcome to the forums! I saw you taking a look at some other people's fics, so I figured I'd pay yours a visit in turn. Glad I did! This is a promising start with a lot of things that appeal to me personally. I think you do a wonderful job of the atmosphere here, especially at the very...