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  1. Negrek

    Pokémon Roads of Life

    Sup, back to look at chapters three and four! But first, I know you went back over the earlier chapters to try and make the POV consistent, and I think you got a good start on it! There were a few places where you missed some third-person language, though, like here: Should be "what I was...
  2. Negrek

    Pokémon Roads of Life

    Hey, welcome to the forums! It's been great to see you settling into the community. Since you posted your story here, I thought I'd check out the first couple chapters! Luke feels like a bit of a blank slate to me so far. He's got plenty of room to grow! I wonder what he's hoping to get out of...
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