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It's great to see another chapter of this! The journey bit is pretty much inevitably my favorite part of a story, so it's a lot of fun to see Prim and Ferry on the road here and get to see a bit more of Kalos. In the first sentence, you're missing a word after "there." I think the second one is...

Eyyy, two more chapters! I'm glad you're continuing this. Less glad that it took me so long to get back to it. Let's get started... Seems a bit odd to say that his focus was gone now after he'd dropped his focus. Maybe look into rewording that first bit there? I like the little details that...

It's nice to be reading something from you again! It's too bad I missed Mongrels in Castelia since it looks like exactly my kind of thing, but it'll be fun following this story from the beginning! It looks like you're going to be exploring some similar themes, too. Usually "babbling" makes me...