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  1. Negrek

    Pokémon handfuls of dust

    Been too long away from this one! Unfortunately I started a review earlier, but it got eaten, so there won't be so many quotes from chapters 3/4 in particular, I'm afraid. Still loads to talk about, though! Obviously a thing or two has happened since I last was reviewing here... Starting with...
  2. Negrek

    Pokémon handfuls of dust

    Somehow the "waste land" references you've got here only hit me about two hours after I wrote my last review. They work wonderfully for Orre and for this story--some great imagery there, and a fitting frame for the bleak picture you want to paint here. No comma after "enormous." For adjectives...
  3. Negrek

    Pokémon handfuls of dust

    Oh man, I'm ALWAYS here for Orre fic, and throw in pokémorphs, too? It's like a dream come true! Loads of really cool ideas in this story even just in one short chapter. Some more picky sentence-level comments first, and then I'll get into the meat of the review. one *that comes Did you maybe...
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