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I don't have too much to say about this chapter, except that it served as a nice cap-off to Part 1 of the fic. It's nice seeing Cuicatl from another psychic's eyes (well, as nice as seeing into someone as self-loathing as her can get), and I especially enjoyed how the Alakazam was used in this...

Chapter 13 Even in flashback, Pix is still the best. :cry: Chapter 14 Yes, and into another another another another another another another another another another another another another another another another... *waist? I love Coco. Again, this is where the speech element kind of...

Chapter 11 Ouch. OUCH, CURB YOUR TONGUE, KEKOA! Good. Okay, I honestly wasn't expecting that sort of joke to appear in this fic, but I'm glad it's here. My reaction exactly. Aww. Chapter 12 Dayum, nature, you scary! Projection there, much? Oh. This line honestly slipped my...

Chapter 10 I don’t have much to say about Chapter 9 in retrospect to be honest. It did give a bit more insight into Kekoa’s backstory and why he acts the way he does now, so that made for a very intense chapter. Now onto chapter 10, at last. So, Negotiations is a very apt title, in more ways...

So, our journey finally begins! Not with a bang, but with, well, something a bit more low key. Compared to a lot of other trainer fics, at least from what I've read, this one puts a lot more emphasis on the actual hiking and camping elements of it, with all its discomforts. Way to make the most...

So, this was a pretty funny chapter, and I think it was well earned, even after the Pixie chapter last time. Although it was a bit lighter on story/action and character progression, for the most part it worked well. The scenes we got with the Mantine, the banter between the three main leads, and...

Chapters 4-6 Alright, it was nice to catch up with what's been written so far, even though there's more on the way, and I really enjoyed what I read. Well, maybe enjoyed isn't the right word for certain parts of the story, since it can be very harrowing at times, but it's definitely a good...

Hello! I've been aware of your content before, as I knew this back when it was called Guidance, and also read some of the Alola Dex entries, which I liked, and was curious to see how much the worldbuilding of that carried into your story. To give my truncated thoughts on it, I'm really liking it...