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And now chapter 35, as far as I'll go for the reviews for Blacklight, though do expect me to be returning to this story soon once I have other obligations taken care of... This was another one where I had a lot to say! These past few chapters in the Forest of Death have been very eventful, and...

Boy, I had a bit more to say on this one, so this'll be just chapter 34. Things are getting pretty interesting... Did they really just let Lance through the forest of the dead after explicitly saying it's a bad idea? How fast is he?! I had the impression he just walked in or something. Meganium...

Back at it again, this time for chapters 32 and 33! Wow, talk about exposition. Meganium is here, bringing up Xerneas out of the blue. And apparently Morgan had landed in the Sea of Wonders, and upon gaining all of his memories, instantly flipped to who he is today. What a switch! Tough he...

Hey Navar! I'm here to do a bunch of reviews as I read through Liberators of Fate where I had left off, for Blacklight review rewards. You sound pretty excited about these incoming arcs, so I'm hoping my feedback will help. Here's my review of the first two chapters since then -- 30 and 31...

Helloooo Navar! And now I am fully caught up with Liberators of Fate! And I’ll definitely say that the story picked up quite a bit for the last few chapters in particular. I think that’s the first thing I’d like to note down about what I read—how focused it seemed to be on an actual endgoal and...

Hey Navar, this is going to be a review for chapters 4 through 8, beginning with our first two-parter, Thunderstruck! Very fast pacing in setting up this conflict. Due to the pacing, it seems to be telegraphed as somewhat of a small villain due to just the reader expectations. Perhaps this is...

[Review for chapters 1~3] Hey Navar! Time to blitz along and give your fic a read next! This is going to be a review up to chapter 3. So the story begins pretty simply, a classic tale of establishing a town and their brief home life and background before setting off on an adventure for...