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Thanks for the reviews, both of you! I think I'm going to answer a question that both of you had right off before I go forward, since it looks like I didn't make that clear at all. And for you, Amby, I think I'll outline something a little more thoroughly since your knowledge of HoC is actually...

Thanks to you both for the reviews, and I'm glad that you've enjoyed the first chapter! I was actually a little worried about this one because it felt like a slow start, but I think the focus on characterization really helped things out. Glad the gamble paid off! If I had to make predictions...

Part 4 Cold, white marble chilled Yveltal’s wings. The only sense of warmth she had was from the blue, furry body cozied up against her back. With a weak breath, she tried to lift her head, expecting to be stiff and groggy. Something felt correct, yet wrong, like there was a disconnect in what...

Part 3 Perhaps worse than death itself was the aftermath that it left behind. That was one thing that Yveltal often tried to avoid; she was guilty enough of their sad faces, and so sick of their misdirected anger. Wasn’t she supposed to be some kind of necessary evil? It’s what she told...

Ha, glad to see you're enjoying yourself, Adam! Part 2 is right along here now, where we follow up on that initial proposal from Jirachi. Part 2 Crashing waves and cruel winds filled Yveltal’s earholes. Bitter cold seeped into her feathers, and she weakly flopped her way through the water with...

Part 1 The trail of blood was fresh. Autumn leaves crackled under Yveltal’s massive talons. She ducked under a branch, careful not to touch the delicate wood, and scanned the ground ahead. A small tuft of white fur showed her the way, and she continued down the path. Another spatter barely...

Yveltal lives a quiet, sad life of killing only when ordered. Despite her benevolent intentions, her position in the pantheon is loathed, and the mortals shun her. Xerneas, who is always bothered by Yveltal's treatment and also beginning to loathe mortals himself, comes up with an idea that can...