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Pokémon The Makings of a Hero
Heya Fuse, this is a review of the first chapter! I think your first few paragraphs did well in establishing the central conflict of what appears to be a short story. Good start, because it means you didn’t dabble with too much backstory than necessary, and you can probably sprinkle in those...- Word Count: 400
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