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(8-10) I ended up reading all three of these chapters at once, which, at the time, made me completely caught up with what’s been posted to TR! I think I actually have something more useful and constructive this time around, now that I’m entirely caught up, too. First: I think Akai got exposed...

(6, 7) I don’t have a lot to comment on for these two chapters in terms of specific scenes so much as key moments. First off, most of the exchange between Shirlee and Akai, and particularly his phone, both went on for a while but didn’t really give off the impression of dragging, at least not...

(chapter 3 ~ 5) Ahhh, and HERE we go with the creeping madness. I think I see what you’re doing here. Start things off subtle and show that Akai isn’t totally insane at first and has at least some brief bouts of lucidity to go with. But then we’re a few more chapters in, and suddenly bam, there...

(Chapter 2) Okay so I still want to pet Akai, but he’s definitely a little bit on the weird side. I sort of got the vibes early on, but they were never really strongly or fully out front until now how obsessive he truly was over Helix, let alone his “ritual room” or the, uh, his buddies in...

(Prologue, chapter 1) Well, based on your judgement, I’ve finally decided to get into reading your work—but for real this time, starting with Seiren! I don’t know what to expect from this at all, to be honest, so despite all the references you make, the only thing I know to expect is that Red...