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I think this is the second-to-latest chapter, "Susana," that I'll be reviewing here! Happy catnip! I think, overall, while the prose was good and the pacing was nice, the actual logistics and narrative framing of this chapter struck me as a little strange, especially since this seems to be...

And so, here we are. This is sort of going to be a broad review of everything that I've read up to this point, so, in other words, everything currently published. And I'll say, I'm definitely interested in whatever broader scope you plan on going with this story, but I'm kind of conflicted on...

Oh! That’s interesting—present tense. I think this is the first fic in a while that I’ve read in third person present. Just the first thing that pops out to me. In the prologue, I noticed that sometimes you start off your sentences as fragments that build upon the previous one, which is okay...