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Chapter 6 Back for more - let's see how Noctum and Baraz fared! Vortex still on the ropes, I see. Whatever they pay him, I bet he doesn't feel like it's enough haha. Honestly, if it weren't Zacian, I'd totally be with Noctum on this one. A stabby stick isn't much help against a...

Chapter 5 Back for more - let's see how Nikki's plan went! But before we do that, it likes we have a detour with the phantom again :eyes: RIP to literally naming someone "Fraud". Maybe not the best person to have as your only free thinking minion :mewlulz: That raises the interesting...

Chapter 4 Excited to be back for more! :quag: Got a bit confused here on whether the "it" refers to "Team Diversity" or "Team Bastion" here. It changes the tone of Yuna's comment, depending on whether she thought she could do a better job, or whether she thought Cid was the one who did. I'm...

Chapter 3 Writing this having just read the first section - already so much stuff to cover! As expected, we're introduced to Chiaki the Grovyle. His composure and skill is definitely quite the contrast vs Yuna and Nikki, but honestly, it looks like their personalities actually complement each...

Heyo, back... a lot later than I'd have liked due to IRL stuff, but back nevertheless. Let's see how things went for Yuna! Chapter 2 (Also, thought I'd try my hand at a quotes review! Never done one of these before) So... this chapter was very clearly aimed at developing out Vortex, and it...

Heya Amby, you know what time it is - blitz time! Very excited to finally get to reading Path of Valor. I've actually not (yet!) read Guiding Light, this'll be my first time reading one of your longer works. I'm pretty new to writing reviews, so I don't have an established style yet - you might...