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Chapter Summary Our heroes gain another traveling companion and head out to a regional park to catch pokemon. Chapter 2 A Meeting / The Near Road / Regional Park / We Ran but It Was There Waiting —June 15th–18th, 128 CR Moriko and Russell rode their bikes to Professor Willow's lab, an...

Oooh I like this suggestion a lot!!! Like I mentioned upthread, I appreciate you guys giving feedback on the potential cartoony/Dursley aspects of the emotional abuse. Ohhhhhh interesting, "grad" instead of "graduation"/"prom" might be a western Canadian-ism on my part xD This is a great...

VERY much appreciate your line-by-line comments @Pen orz I am guilty of setting up certain rhythms of description depending on the scene, so I appreciate hearing that it just felt repetitive for you here, lol :V The hope was that it would have a certain poetic quality. That's a good question...

Thank you so much @Dragonfree !! Thank youuuuuuu, I fuss over these first couple chapters a lot because AM I!!!! HOOKING THE READER!!!!! but I think ultimately it may be a good representation of what the rest of the story will be like, infodumpy bits and all :V lol Negrek mentioned this as...

@kintsugi thank you so much for your reviews orz I like your analysis here a lot, FWIW generally you can tell the type of an attack in my setting because it tends to turn into color-coded energy on some level. I also have a handful of fake types including Acid, so fortunately or unfortunately...

Chapter Summary Our heroes attempt to get their affairs in order before setting off on their journey. High school continues to be a bummer. x.x.x.x.x Chapter 1 Cruelty / Runaways / High School Does End / Regrettable Footwear Decisions / Treacherous Hopes —June 11th–13th 128 CR Moriko's...

Prologue Prisons / Vigils / Preludes and Nocturnes / A Warning / A Fall, Down Into the Dark Ten years ago The crowd moved as one, their finery shifting and catching the light as they followed the action across the arena, hit and counter-hit. Ferocious pulses of electricity, of darkness, of...

They knew that Gaiien could be dangerous, but they didn't expect anything like this. Three trainers set out on their badge quest in a wild land cloaked by the shadows of old legends. Ancient powers awaken, and demon pokémon, giants, and hybrids converge for a showdown they couldn't imagine...