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Chapter 20 Blitz review The flash backs a good way to bring people up to speed on the previous seasons. I means theres been over 200 episodes and as someone who tapped out of the anime season two it helps so much. We flip from exposition to back to interpol and musing on how the public...

Chapter 19 Review blitz Its interesting to see the world building in play. Yes gym leaders are athletes. But so much more. I imagine clamps will be slapped down after all this boils over but for now theyre all but untouchable. Which is part and partial of interpols problems. I suspect per...

Chapter 18 Blitz review While not smooth as there are so many civilians and security needing medical treatment and therepy, plus lat' belly flopping in the streets to off grunts, i suspect that alolas using guz' to sweep the damage under the rug but theres so many holes in the plan and my...

Chapter 17 review. Blitz review I like the opening. It shows ashs appreciation for the world he's in as well as his jaded state. Before hed never of noticed the guards or the fact they were decorative now he does. And he cant unsee it. Anabel: "well, i mean this in the nicest way but you're...

Chapter 15 review Huh now smart ic move might be to turn and bail after planting bugs or something... But knowing ash he's likely to plow into the lions mouth headfirst. I'm surprised pet's able to keep a pokerface through this since his position is the apex of" i know who knows who knows"...

Really anabel is whining at the wrong thing. Death by being slow-cooked in one's juices. THere's nightmare fuel for the ages. I remember being very amused by the whole team/family classification as thier cover. And I wondered how Looker took the younger cast being all like "but daaad" to...

Chapter 13 review Having to tackle this one via phone sorry in advance for typos. Ah so the promised Domino back story... misanthrope right out of the gate.. makes sense considering her ah... profession... and whatnot. Per her priorities, being survival of the most base slant that most don't...

review chapter 12: Meets 6.5k limit being 10k plus... (What can I say couch writes stuff longer than my work?). You know it's an interesting comparison, Ash was mainly good, a bit prideful, but post fall he's a lot more aware of the more mundane evils around him. Well, he is getting his face...

Review line by line, Of auctions aka chapter 7 Ah, the joy of class dispute, fun times. I’m thinking Anabel would have loved this… there was an artist, who got forwarded 30k for artistic fees, he sent along with a blank piece of canvas as “art” and titled it “Take the money and run”. The worst...

A review for chapter 6. Also to be added to the review blitz.. yeah I know it's not new but my time's so limited I'm prioritizing fics that I need to do rather than play up the score system to get prizes. Word count. 1286 (I had to put this fic in pieces since I interspaced quotes from the...

Hmm, so Ash is trying to wrangle a world adjustment and doing... So so at it. I appreciate that you show he's not a natural fit for it and it's his canon based trait of being a determinatior that shines.... Speaking of canon traits... he didn't tell the people overseeing his well being he's a...

Alright, I'm here for catnip and since this piece is impressively long I'm going to have to cut some corners I wound up skipping my usual line by line and doing a bulk summation instead. Hopefully, it works. (770 words) This fic very much feels like a “and now what” tale. Where Ash has...