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Review reply (appologies this is going to be done on cell phone so expect a slew of typos) No worries on how long it took. Lifes been exciting a lot on my end so i definitly get not being able to be prompt on anything... Thanks for going a bit deeper in then most of my readers. Well i am...

Silvia and Green The Heist: part 2, Closing the gap As Silver would point out… the most important part of planning the heist, is getting to the location and planning an in and an out. Otherwise plots were just dreams. Loot not looted didn’t leave anything for them to sell for food, water, or...

There were a few basic rules of a heist. The first, learn of your surroundings and the destination. Get your tools in a line. Make sure your partner knows the plan. Then go for it. Planning an impromptu visit with a plus one took more effort than Green thought it would. And it started...

Its a more than fair reply thanks for taking a shake at the story though you're unfamilair with the genre... I definitly appreciate the catches on my errors hopefully patching them up will help accessabilty a little. I'll probably apply the non grammer error fixer uppers to later tales...

Need to run through Grammerly. Green really hated it when adults dug into her phone. After a quick review of Silver’s most recent send along, something that’d made Silvia laugh and soured Giovanni’s mood further. He’d gotten into her most recent footage and watched it, stony face, jaw muscle...

The nice thing about avoiding storms is they left little opportunity for chit-chat. Thus Green didn’t have time to berate herself for saying her first name or have to stammer out a fake last name, or anything equally exciting. It was just running, (well trotting for Blasty but the turtle was...

AN: Need to run through gramerly Green alternated between construction sites, hotels, and abandoned apartments. Steering clear of the beaches, only nipping into small mom and pop fish markets to get fresh feed for Blasty, because he’d earned it. She even bought it, skipping her usual means of...

It was scarily easy to fall to old habits. Break and enter, oldest hat there was. She picked a hotel that was cheap more than anything else, with wide halls that were able to be seen by a nearby tree and a lack of cameras. Once the cleaner finished with the top floors and head down Green used...

She’d had one… one bad episode in public. Well sorta public. There’d been an ice ring attached to the school gym, nearest to the lockers and changing rooms. It was a seasonal thing, inflicted on the students in the summer to make their exercise curriculum “different”. As it was Green had missed...

I was aiming to make this tale somewhat accessable to those who havent read the manga. And avoid the dreaded info dump. Per your coments I was somewhat successful. Honestly the stalking scenes were meant to show Giovanin is creepy. He does similar and worse things in the special manga that a...

He slept through her departure, waking a bit stiff since though aesthetically pleasing, the couch wasn’t meant for prolonged habitation. Habit had him poke around the home, memorize the layout. He left the obvious temptations a regular mobster would have fell for alone. Poorly hidden jewelry, a...

Personal experience had taught him that luring the altruistic away from their passion was a tiresome process that usually backfired more often than not. And even if an asset was culled they lost something of their fire, their drive, once pulled from their preferred causes. The moral shift of...

An: Some profanity, talk of extortion, and general bitterness. Also, Zia is supposedly Italian for "aunt". “Silver’s running out of people to get to.” Green confessed. “That leaves Mask, Lance, and me.” One in three odds, with things slanted in her favor. She’d run a hand over her face...

AN: She’d ran until running burned, ignoring the people around her, darting around someone who’d tried to slow her down… And only slowed when she hit the beach. It wasn’t her training spots, there were no boxes or Rockets, but Sevii was an island, all you had to do was run long enough, fast...

AN: Trigger warning, discussed child abuse, assault, Giovanni triggers Green, and the fall out leaves them both at each other throats. Green’d been walking ditty, who kept changing shape as they went down the street. Starting as a four-legged rattata, drifting to two-legged bunny ‘mon Green...

review reply for chapter one Wow, thanks for leaving such a thoughtful and detailed review, it means a lot. here's my reply, roughly line by line. About Gio: I'll admit writing him is a challenge. Minor spoilers is that he's changed a bit, but not as much as he's thought -he actually admits...

She’d taken her run to the box pile, zipping and dodging about, chasing Nido and being chased, ignoring the grumbled complaints. There were more, and they were spread wider, taller, machamp and ‘kaun’s doing most of the lifting, their trainers watching on, consulting clipboards and...

AN: Sorry I needed a fluff chapter from before. The next few are going to be rough. Green has a bad flashback, triggered by her feeling unsafe, and it gets ugly in her head and out of it. Reality get a bit wierd. TW: flashbacks, discussed violence, brainwashing. “Don’t forget your MP3...

Boxes are piling on the beach. Boxes atop boxes, right in the middle of… well it’s not secluded, but it’s a not popular spn of the beach. More rock than sand, enough so Green wore boots. Someone has smoothed the sands, crunched the rocks together, and on these platforms started what looks...

There was a snowman on Giovanni’s desk in his Viridian office. Clearly crafted by pre-adult hands, the tells were in the size and shape. It’d been set on the center of his desk, one twig thrust through it, to give it arms, some leaves pressed against it to give it “clothes”. It looked a bit...