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I'm sure it was amazing... But your words do it justice.

Asaph's basically got creeper of the year award... He only doesnt qualify when he isnt on screen... I wonder what veronica and her folk know about jir's past? His family and what not? I also wonder if asaph said anything about it to veronica... Veronicas folks: immediatly cautious per...

Ah so things are for them going to go from the fire into the lava pit... I mean canon strongly hints very few of these people are going to make it out of this ok so its not too much a shocker... Still its interesting to see where the blade comes down and how.

Chapter 34 Review I can't believe i missed this one. Lets fix that. You kmow its a shame jir' finds his fathers work boring because honestly i find it pretty interesting but then regularly wikiwalk stuff from basic utilities to airplanes to bridges. On the other hand i wonder what kind of...

Ah but would jirs dad do so... Because that omission feels kinda important?

Chapter 33 reaction And considering "being an adult" is a euphenism i am both crimging and squicked out whem jir uses it. Ung. asaph needs a nice long life sentence amd some shiny clappers all things considered. You know i remember thinking his bird catching ship was so extra in the movie...

Out of curiousity how many people were ruffled/bailed out from the warning/content? Personally i appreciate the heads up but but i sorta am curious. I gather jer' is doing ok with the pressure but i worry for (have honestly been worried for) veronica. Not just about the content warning wise...

looking forward to it then... Will bring explosive friendly gear then.

I'm a little surprised how long it took to set up Veronica's find and incorperate it into a showing. Granted, them setting it up to corrispond with a sporting event (the league?) Gaurentees more traffic. so its smart... Laughs. I get jir's kneejerk disdain havong been the nerdy kid at a jock...

Im sure it will be... Once asaph puts down the sheering scizzors and steps away from the minors... I suspect fuller evidence will show one way or the other in the next few chapters... My guess is 5? Anyway time (and you via tales) will tell..

I mean asaph might as well be wearing a sign/shirt saying EVIL SURROGATE FATHER FIGURE for jer' and veronica... Just saying

I am so behind... let's fix that, shall we? Chapter 29 obsession review/reply. You know it's hard to imagine Jer' caring but his feelings towards Veronica show he does. And I don't know if warning Ver' would be a better option or not. He's a person fixated on things after all... and I think...

I look forward to it... Honestly ive been waiting for him to get off his grooming run and go all back stabby mc staberson on the kids.

review for 25 You know having worked in stores during holidays I’m not going to dispute that the vacation/holi of the cycle is paramount and does lead to its own illusions of the world only centering on that one idea/season/festivity… at least until the next one rolls around. Seaside abodes...

Chapter 24 review Really while I see why Jir’ didn’t take a trainer’s journey, his perchance for items rather than companions, I have to wonder if he wouldn’t have benefited from a far-flung journey in it’s own way. He comes across as rather restless. Jir’s setting himself for quite a fall as...

Sorry I've been away so long, here's a review of chapter 23 with hopefully the other two to follow soon. 23 Review: I love how impolite almost eeks out quiet in sheer horror from Jir’s perspective. You get a sense that Veronica is so eagerly bucking her reigns while Jir’s more placid going...

I look forward to it!

Review of chapter 19 to present chapter 22 ENTRY 5 of ANIVERSITY EVENT (words 600) Hm really father and son aren’t that far apart with their creator modes. Interest modes? Anyway, it sounds like he’s trying to recreate something that Jir’ saw in the exhibit. Helen’s got a point. If she’s...

Review of 16 ENTRY 4 ANNIVERSARY EVENT (words 516) I wonder as Jir keeps chasing the city mouse lifestyle if he’s aware of the cat at the end of the tale… Or if he’d even care at this point. Hm seems as if Veronica’s dad is something of a similar cut of Jir’s dad, down to the earth and a...

Review of chapter 15 ENTRY 3 for ANNIVERSARY EVENT (300 words) Early bird much Jir’? I imagine a factory like Jir’s father’s running from dawn to dusk so that must be obscenely early. (says the nightowl) Personally, I think Helen’s trying, to connect with Jir’ a bit, she’s at least paying...