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i love the gen 9 reference LMFAO come on Odette shake it off Aww this is cute, hard launch fr This is such a seamless transition from the section of the chapter of Odette + Valentin bonding into actual plot stuff. How do you do it???? Give me some of whatever Sacrilege you're taking plsssss I...

Chapter 10, 11, 12, 13, 14 Reviews: These chapters were so good and kept me so hooked I read them all at once when I should have been working. Firstly, the whole chapter with Dorien's POV was really cool. It really helped emphasize how disgusting Dorien and his lackeys really were, while at the...

Chapter 9 Review: Small detail but I'm not sure this is the expression you're going for. 😭 Usually riding my dick is like being obsessed. IMO "on my ass" works a little better. This chapter is already off to a crazy start! I didn't realize we'd get such a close up into the shiny trade and...

Chapter 8 Review: I love the groupchat, I've read a lot of fics with them and it's making me wanna write them into my own. Seeing the chat got me some questions tho...who are Claude and Noemie and Basille? Missing a period. Also I was a little confused about this. Odette said the last...

Chapter 7 Review: Holy cow what a chapter! In such a place filled with rich people, I half expected to see Florent's other kid somewhere in the vicinity, but we got a lot of characters nonetheless. I love that we got an Isaur feature! She's my favorite; she likes food and is a goated...

Chapter 6 Review: Finally, a Vienna feature! It's interesting to see what she's actually like after hearing from Florent's POV. I like that she has more of a sibling relationship with Odette than a parent one; I've heard very similar things from people I know who were a product of teen...

Chapter 5 Review: And the adventure begins! This chapter seems like a bit of a setup, and I fw it. Clearly curiosity killed the cat and I swear it's gonna kill me too with how invested I am. Who is this JL Menetries??? I didn't mention it earlier, but seeing Pokemon play games is funny, like...

Chapter 4 Review: Fun chapter! It was great seeing the dynamic between Odette and Bernard, I can tell they care deeply for each other. The little Oreo race was cute, although with all the other Pokemon references I half expected you to call them Blitzle Cookies or something lmao. I love how...

Chapter 3 Review: Absolute banger of a chapter! I love the small little mentions of Odette's grandfather; it's clear that he's important to her but he's unfortunately in a dangerous role. I hope nothing bad happens to him (I've been scarred by similar tropes 😭). Also the fact that her...

Chapter 2 Review: Turns out Odette is a little bit of a psycho, but i love that, it gives some awesome characterization. There’s clearly more her than meets the eye. Seems like she was taken advantage of and ended up killing someone in self defense, two mental health crushing incidents in one...

Chapter 1 Review: Aaand there she is, the main attraction, Odette! I like her already, she seems to have a strong moral compass and thinks for herself. Someone told her there was a Shiny Trade, but she took it upon herself to find out why it's actually bad. I like Noel, too! He seems like an...

Prologue Review: I'm already super intrigued by Florent; even the thought that he had about killing babies makes me fairly certain he's gonna be the antagonist, although he seems a little better by the end. The moment i heard that he had a child he didn't want anymore of an important...