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I love this slow intro to the chapter, you have such a way with scene-setting. I’ve noticed that you really excel at making these normal situations uncomfy through Red’s narration. The idea behind a pidgey cursing like a sailor has legs lol. I don’t typically like pokemon speaking, but this bit...

Chapter 4+5 Exchange is finally here! I’ve said it before, you paint a picture with setting descriptions at times. Absolutely gorgeous depiction of the forest with words. One thing that I absolutely love is that the narration follows Red off on tangents and really makes you sit in his mental...

Double chapter review drop! This will be mostly stream of consciousness, with praise and crit handed out where I think its due. Chapter 2: I will say beforehand, that the chapter seems very polished with solid prose all around. It shows the care you put into this story. So, Red’s seeing a...

Alright, so I’m here for your long-awaited review! The prologues are damn effective. Personally, while the second one is maybe more effective at delivering me the information, it just can’t match the sheer disgust and skin-crawliness that the first prologue left me with. The second one gave me...