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Alright, after far too long, it's finally time for me to review chapter 7 of this fic! My apologies for the wait! Extravagance is not something I'd want to be smelling. Seeing, sure, hearing, fine, but smelling it just seems overwhelming. ...alright, this is beyond extravagance. This is...

Here to review chapters 5 and 6! Virtue Corp seems to have noble intentions, but they still seem shady. They're against the shiny trade, but that letter from chapter 4 shows they have a connection to Team Enigma, albeit being against them. The game of Twister was a nice bit of levity. Noel is...

Here to review chapters 3 and 4! Oooooh, starting right off the bat with more mystery and sacrilege stuff. 1500 kilograms of the stuff found, and not a single lead on Team Enigma. I'm guessing they're using one of the blood legendaries to clean up any traces they leave behind. The bit where...

I'm finally here to review chapter 2! First off, the beginning section with the street racers did an excellent job with establishing Odette's anger issues, especially the bit where Odette lashes out at Noel in her rage. Very well done! Also, nice chapter title drop. Odette and Noel's banter...

Here for our review exchange! Doing the prologue and chapter 1 for now, but I'll try and also do the rest soon! Well then! That scene with Gulattive was already terrifying, and you managed to make it even scarier in the rewrite! Nicely done! Really liking the new version of how Florent learns...

I'm here to leave a review on both the prologue and chapter 1! The opening sentence is really good! It's an excellent hook to draw the reader right into the action. The fourth paragraph is very nice! It begins to establish Florent and Armel's personalities, and how much they contrast. This...