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Alright, I'm finally here for our review exchange! I'm so sorry I took so long! I absolutely adored the gym battle. It has the tension, dynamic battlefield, cool tactics, and creative move use that I love both battles both in this fic and the manga so much for. It was amazing, and each attack...

Here to review chapter 14! Been a long while since I read this chapter, but I remember really enjoying it! Don't quite remember the exact context for this chapter, but I think Jade has broken into a Rocket laboratory in order to rescue Chibi? And she ran into three other hybrids that agreed to...

Here to review chapter 8! Oh boy. Starting off with the emergency evacuation. Firestorm helping Jade up made me smile. OH. Looks like a lot of people are dying here. And there's no lifeboats. Oh dear. The description after the explosion was amazing! I could really feel Jade's sheer terror...

Here to review chapter 7! Oh boy. It's just going to be Jade and Chibi, exploring in the darkness. This'll be interesting. I'm loving the description of the ship! I can visualize it very clearly! Seven chapters in and we have a dead body! And to think that this isn't even anywhere close to...

Chapter 6 I really like Jade's last-second worries at the start of the chapter! The moment right before Jade was admitted onto the ship was really tense! Great job! Jade's inner monologue is so good. I love the description of the ship interior! It's very vivid and detailed! I'm going to go...

5 Extra Oh boy, seems like Jade is making a phone call home. This is going to be interesting. I like that she initially thought that this was a joke. And her mom's not very happy with this. I wonder how this is going to turn out. Hooray! Her mom gave the ok! That "stay safe" line really...

Chapter 5 I really like the conversation at the beginning! It makes sense that they'd all be a bit shaken from everything that happened. Do I see some foreshadowing here? I really like Ajia's personality! She is a really interesting character! Jade's realization that she really was a trainer...

Chapters 2-4 I kind of got carried away with reading after that chapter 1 cliffhanger, so I'll do a summary review of chapters 2-4. To be honest...I really couldn't find any issues. It was all superb all the way through. I was completely hooked until Jade was free. I especially liked Spencer...

On Chapter 1 The description at the beginning while Jade was riding their bike was absolutely amazing! The bit about Rudy about to be going on their trainer journey was excellent. The small part where Jade interacts with the Houndour right before Rudy announces his plans makes it really hit...

On Prologue I absolutely love the description at the beginning. It's so vivid! In addition, that one stylized person is a VERY intriguing hook. The second half, unfortunately, isn't nearly as engaging, at least to me. It just sorta feels like mostly generic school drama stuff. I really liked...