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Onto prologue 2! Something that's starting to bother me a bit is the extreme amount of space between paragraphs. It's a bit disruptive to scroll over twice as often as I usually have to with fics. Like with right here: That's nine blank lines between paragraphs. You don't need that many...

After reading this, I'm pleasantly surprised! I'll start off with what I liked most: The intrigue. There's a lot of unfamiliarity here, with Sentinels and a League, but the mystery dungeons and rescue teams help ground it, and let me be intrigued by the new stuff without being completely...