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Back for round two! Ch. 11, what uuuuuup This chapter was fun! Tense, interesting, and felt both genuinely high stakes and "I am 18 years old and these are high stakes" high stakes, which is a compliment! In prior chapters Nat's age felt a little ambiguous-but-young; here it feels real and...

Hey-o! Here to drop a thorough Ch. 10 review! I'm quite glad I picked this chapter to pivot towards one-at-a-time reviews, seems like a huge tonal shift! I'm excited to see how these explorations thread into the 'main' story (though I admit that, even after reading this chapter, I am much more...

Hey hey! So this is a brief little review of what I've read up through Chapter 5! - You've done an incredible job of giving your world a very distinct "flavor." It's gritty, a little grim, dark, but all without being overwhelmingly so. It's incredibly real, and very poignant to the problems...