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!!!! Another chapter? Yes, please!! I really enjoy the themes that are already making themselves known in this story—largely, ones of redemption, forgiveness and loving yourself, etc. Kotone is a lovely little ray of sunshine, she is simply too pure for this world—and she’s exactly what Silver...

I’ve had this on my list for a while, and then you went and uploaded a new chapter, so I thought—let’s do this! Overall, your prose is very nice and flows pretty well. I do think you could probably trim down on a lot of extra details to help with the pacing—it feels like there’s a handful of...