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Chapter 17: Dust and Shadow Trudly. Folly. Cail and his companion, then one other lurking behind them. Dust and shadows, broken vending machines and old shipping crates scattered across the room, and…only one exit, on the opposite wall and behind the five trainers. Wes took all of it in as...

....Welp. Looks like I missed a handful of you! I'm so sorry!!! Replying to these has been a delight!

Time to hop on the reply train once again! Goodness, so many lovely thoughts to respond to! :veelove: Thank you all for your support!

Chapter 16: Blue Huge thanks to @kintsugi and @Pen for beta reading this chapter! 💛 Immaculate. That was the most appropriate word to describe his office. The bleached walls perfectly matched the white tiled floor. Even his desk only held the essentials: a slim white monitor and a stack of...

Gonna be a little more on top of replying to reviews this time! LOL Also, Canis....I totally forgot that I'd already replied to your review and went and quoted a bunch of things before I remembered, LOL. But eyy I'm gonna reply because I have more to say now that I'm not overwhelmed by replying...

Would you look at that! It’s a wild Yellow, FINALLY replying to reviews! It’s a Christmas Miracle...in April! :quag: That said, there are a LOT of reviews to catch up on, so please forgive me if my responses aren’t super detailed But please know that I love and appreciate all of your feedback...

The last few weeks had been quite unusual for Neo—though, they were unusual for his brother and his trainer, too, he was sure. Still, it wasn't every day that he could say he had his own mission to fulfill. "Look, guys," Wes had quietly said to him and his brother one afternoon, "I don't want...

Chapter 15: Reunion They were being followed. Wes had suspected it for a few days now; he could have sworn he'd felt an unwelcome pair of eyes boring into him from the shadows as he and Rui spent the days combing the streets for more trainers to battle, and was almost certain he'd glimpsed...

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Got some meaty reviews here, love it!

Whew, got a couple reviews to respond to here! Let’s dig in:

Wow, hello again!! It’s a pleasant surprise to see you back again so soon! :D

So I think you reviews are becoming my new favorite thing, your commentary makes me snort hahaha xD

Thanks for another amazing review!! :D :D :D Oh boy, I just edited chapter 4 last night, and I keep forgetting that the line breaks between scenes don't transfer over when I copy/paste. Ughhh. So sorry about that, it probably made it rough to read. I assure you there were supposed to be line...

Pen, I'm really living for your JUICY reviews. You are very thorough and provide specific, actionable feedback, and I appreciate it so much!

AAAH Tetra your review just made me so HAPPY?? It's really nice to see what has been landing for readers, and you just brought ALL the feel-goods with you to this review. You're the MVP, friend.

Chapter 14: Perspective "This is where y'all live?" Lon's face was a picture of shock as he took in the sight of the sizable house. Compared to the sprawling, luxurious buildings in Phenac, Duking's home wasn't extraordinary by any means; it was a simple cabin-style home that might have once...

(Art by Pen) Chapter 13: Evolution Origin Ten Years Earlier Neo loved the outdoors. There was just something about the way the sun warmed his brown and tan pelt and gleamed off every surface. There was something about the way the desert winds tickled his ears pleasantly and carried with it...

OMG hi!! So happy to see you here! this might be my favorite intro to any review I’ve received, ever. XD Both...both is good. ;) Such a drama queen, I LOVE HIM Hey same! Novo’s a cutie, too, just a little more...tightly wound. XD