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  1. HelloYellow17

    Pokémon the envy of eden

    Another MEGA REVIEW, let’s do this! I’ve left my general thoughts on this fic as a whole a while back, before I really knew how to actually dive deep into a review and put my thoughts into words. I’ll just restate a few of the things I’ve said before: Your prose? GORGEOUS. I haven’t read your...
  2. HelloYellow17

    Pokémon the envy of eden

    Okay, I’m back!! I think I’m going to go through and review each chapter gradually, because I need a refresher on the earlier chapters anyways, but I’m jumping in here because this is one of the chapters that has really stood out to me so far, and I have lots of thoughts to share!
  3. HelloYellow17

    Pokémon the envy of eden

    I know I’ve reviewed a newer chapter than this one but I somehow missed this one! oooh this is SO. GOOD. And heartbreakingly accurate. I love it and I hate it at the same time. Another good one. But I can’t help but wonder what Inari’s actual stance is toward humans throughout this chapter...
  4. HelloYellow17

    Pokémon the envy of eden

    OH BOY A NEW CHAPTER HERE WE GO this is just a nitpick, really: it should be “Yes, one that my friend, a hydreigon, told me.” Oh, ouch. This is N’s struggle in a nutshell here; he has a voice, he can hear what others can’t, but he struggles to know how to make people listen. He is...
  5. HelloYellow17

    Pokémon the envy of eden

    It’s long overdue for me to share my thoughts on this fic! To be honest, I don’t consider myself a professional by any means, and I don’t really feel qualified to give constructive criticism, especially for a story that is already so MARVELOUSLY written. But I’m happy to share what specific...
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