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I’ve been looking forward to this! I enjoy your writing a lot, and this fic in particular has a strangely cozy feel despite all the existential crisis and the crimes and injustice and the anxiety-ridden protagonist, lol. Maybe it’s because it’s almost always raining or misty in each...

Chapter 8, let’s do this! Oh, boy. Right away, the title has me very intrigued. “Raid” definitely implies a lot of things are going to go down this chapter. A solid chapter! And I was not expecting that twist at the end, at least, not so soon. I like that you didn’t fully reveal what it was...

Well, hello, it’s been a minute! Another fantastic chapter, as usual! This feels much like a “calm before the storm” kind of chapter, and the weather mentioned throughout seems symbolic of that, too. Haru is finally making a decision about something HE wants to do—yes! I’m so proud! Can’t wait...

Another chapter, you say?!

Back for chapter 5! I'm surprised to see that only 5 chapters are up, as I recall seeing 8 or 9 on FFN? Eh, it's no big deal, I'm sure you'll get around to cross-posting eventually :) This is a rather depressing tidbit, honestly. Haru doesn't really strike me as an outgoing or social type to...

Back for more! And oh, boy, things REALLY went downhill quickly, didn't they? Luck has not been on Haru's side for these next couple chapters. What an interesting detail! I take it you don't adopt the "pokemon are kept in stasis in their pokeballs" theory, then? To be honest, I don't either -...

A very valid question, one that ought to be addressed at least somewhat in every Pokémon story, in my opinion. How much do they understand? Again, I have to applaud you for so clearly outlining the laws that exist in this world, even though it’s just the start of the second chapter. I’m amazed...

Okay I actually stumbled across this fic on FFN a few weeks ago, but it’s HIGH time I leave a review on this beautiful, beautiful story. To start: your prose. Is. Gorgeous. It’s so smooth and vivid, and I can clearly imagine each scene as though I’m actually immersed in it. I love that, while...