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Heya, I promised to read and review your story up to where it’s at and this is it! This will be more stream of consciousness on my thoughts on the story, not so much a line-by-line analysis or going through each chapter. First off, I think your story is plenty good, and has plenty of potential...

Heya, this is a small review for chapters 1-2 as I get acquainted with your story and this site. Honestly, I quite liked the setup you have here, even with the relatively small wordcount so far. I'd say my favorite part was the whole dream sequence, and mainly because it's decently evocative...