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So it seems a lot of significant changes have been made since last time I read! I basically reread the new prologue and chapters 1-8 to catchup to where I am now. The new prologue is completely different I see. I will admit, I am of two minds. I honestly enjoyed the first one a lot with the...

I have been rereading/catching up and I figured I'd share my Chapter 8 sus after Odette's long readlist/post. Here's my theory, no idea if this will get contradicted by future role reveals or claims.

This is a speed review and I'm at work so I won't go super critique. Even so I thought this chapter was quite good! I really enjoyed it and I think the pacing is moving nicely. The tone across chapters feels consistent and each chapter reveals a little more about the world, Odette and this...

Quick review time! Wow! I have to say this story has improved greatly since I last read it. I absolutely love the revisions you made. The dialogue feels very good and colloquial, very natural. I also deeply adore the choice to rewrite the final battle, and replace it with a match against Dorien...

This is just a really quick review. Very good chapter 2. We get to get a further glimpse into Odette and her life. We can clearly see there's something *off* about her though. The way she got so irrationally angry and responds to little things with a full on meltdown. I also really liked the...

Alright, its time to give thoughts on chapter 1, hooray! First, loved the opening big with Castform and weird weather. I won't go into line by lines much this time, since I didn't see any glaring errors and/or they were already touched on. First up, our MC, Odette! I was very intrigued by her...

Alrighty, I decided to review the prologue cause this story caught my attention! First up, very intriguing prologue. I thought you did a very good job setting the stage for a lot of really interesting elements. Team Enigma, their big bad leader, and his one and only heir, Armel. You've also...