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Okay I'll try to keep this very very simple (for my own sake). But it might get jumbled or messy. Speculative spoilers ahead. Anyways idk if this is contradicted by future chapters released on FFN but it was fun to dump anyways. having a ball with this and can't wait for more.

:mad: Is Hoenn not an island in this? I have to admit I reread this three times feeling very confused. Unless they somehow took a 6-hour train ride over the ocean. I guess Hoenn isn't an island here. This was very jarring though, but then again its possible this was mentioned before I just...

I'll be sticking to priiarly flavor reviews unless I notice anything really off. Anyways cheese and crackers what a chapter. I feel like I say this all the time but what a rollercoaster ride. I wish I could get my big battles to feel so clean. I'll have to keep studying. Anyways, I thought all...

Forgive my somewhat disjointed thoughts. Anyways you pace this story really nicely, lulls between fights, cool down just enough before revving up. For something intending to be a fast-paced actionfic you do a superb job with everything IMO. Onto more solid thoughts. Another good chapter, a very...

Time to address the finality! The turning point if you will, chapter 36. I've got to say, this was thoroughly enjoyable to finally have answers revealed. Interestingly enough though, nothing here really surprised me. But this isn't bad. I feel like the details revealed here feel like a natural...

Alright, gonna review 33, 34, 35! You're fairly far in the story and your writing and everything is honestly solid, so I probably won't give any hardcore critique, but rather my thoughts on the events of each chapter and how they were compiled. 33: I really enjoy the way you write your fight...

Well, time to give a broad review of Book 1. Especially chapters 26-31 Not gonna lie, it was a crazy ride. There were some plot choices you know I had some doubts I really liked this line. I think it sums up a lot of feelings throughout the whole of everything that happened. Jade is trying...

I feel obliged t leave a review cause idk, why not? I'm going to be frank. Cause I like this story. So far I don't have any problems with grammar, plot, pacing, prose etc. I think its all very solid. really enjoyable. The reveal that Starr is apparently Giovanni's daughter is only mildly...

So as long as review blitz is going, I figured I'd leave another review. Naturally, given I am coming into reading LC late and there's chapters upon chapters ahead of me, you can feel free to ignore any criticisms that will be addressed later. Alright, so I'll try my best to cover my thoughts...

Wow, what an intense set of chapters. I was wondering when Jade when get up some guts and try and rescue Chibi. After everything Chibi did for her, it seems only fair. Really good read, very tense, lots of fast paced action. Huge fat bonus points for a Flygon!!!!! Loved the personality of the...

Ah, there it is. Glad to see the inclusion here, much more clear that she's actively trying not to think about poor Chibi. I really dig the inclusion of mentioning how other regions have different types of battles they favor. Ah Jade. Knowing moves is half the battle i'd think. How can you...

Since this concludes the S.S. Anne arc I figured I just give some brief thoughts. That was a pretty wild ride! Tense and a lot of crazy action stuff. (Still not sure how much I actually enjoy pokespeech as a thing but hey, its still interesting) You definitely captured and essence of being in...

Well, I'm reading this potentially so I figured I'd have some fun and put some thoughts reactions. I'll admit, I tried twice before to read this but didn't get too far, got distracted. Stopped in chapter 1 usually. Clearly I was a fool for not reading far enough into chapter 1. Dark hair and...