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I really thought I'd read chapter 17 but I can find no record of it. maybe its because I remember beta reading it.

Catnip time!!! Covering 15 & 16 finally. I really enjoy the overall trend of the story so far. I think its evolving nicely. They are moving slowly but I think in the scope of what your whole story is going to be its not bad. In 15 we get a glimpse into some of Wes's implied history with Renna...

Alright time to BEEG review and catch up for fun. I'm not huge on grammar nitpicks, so when a story is solid in that department, I prefer to focus on themes, prose and plot beats. My big review here will cover everything from 8-14, and give some commentary, broad strokes, and reactionary stuff...

Nearly forgot the best bit!

Gah, I'm really liking this story. Stopping at 4 was hard. I'll probably read more later. Anyway, I'll start with a broad overview of the whole story up until now, chapter 7. Very interesting. It's been forever and a day since I played colosseum, so this is all fairly new to me. I absolutely...

Alrighty! This is probably my first Orre fic I can think of. From what I gather, it seems to be a rewrite of Pokemon Colosseum, which is great. It's been years and years since I played those games, so this is practically fresh to me. I read chapters 1-3, so I'll give my thoughts on those...