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Can't help myself, I keep coming back to this story. I think Noted really solidified the intent of this story for me? Even though its present in the earlier chapters, the shift to a pokemon that finally doesn't feel like a prisoner/has a different perspective cements what direction I think this...

Ahh, another chapter. This time from a Bisharp's point of view. I'm really loving all these different POVs. Narsil. Great chapter name too, I get that reference. Totally digging it. I enjoyed reading the details and understanding what kind of pokemon I was following this time. It's almost like...

So after yesterday's review I had to come back for more. If anything, I was curious to see what direction this unusual story would tell. I'll be reviewing uh... the next two parts? So... Three and Four. I don't actually have much in the way of 'critique' as much as observations and reactions and...

ALrighty, gonna try and squeak in a review right before blitz for this week ends. Read 'chapters' 1 and 2. Let's begin. The prose was fascinating. You chose to write in a sort of semi-second person, which is an interesting choice. It works very well for a story told in an unusual way. The...