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All right, I've actually been meaning to write this review for the last week or so, but what can you do. Since this time I'm gonna be reviewing the remaining four chapters I have left I opted for a more general review style where I can talk about those four chapters and the story as a whole so...

Sorry it took me so long to get to chapters 9 and 10, it's been a pretty hectic couple of days. Anyways on a general idea I think chapter 9 works in giving us more detail about Wes' past when he was still in Snaggen and how he deals with it now that he's trying to leave. I do wonder how thing...

All right, let's keep the ball rolling with chapters 7 and 8. Chapter 7 was a breath of fresh air because as far as I can tell, it's entirely original. In the vein of chapter 4, this one is more centered around the aftermath of chapter 6 and focuses on expanding Wes' and Rui's relationship as...

Chapter 5 and 6 let's goooo Okay, so these two chapters presented a shift in the story, by which I mean that the story finally started. The main conceit behind Colosseum was always the shadow pokemon and the fact you essentially had to steal pokemon from the bad guys. Having said that, it's...

All right, coming in for chapters 3 and 4 I liked these two chapters a lot more and I think a big part of that can be attributed to Wes and Rui. You convey their relationship in a really cute way, allowing both of their personalities to stand out while also bouncing them off each other. Rui is...

Yay Orre fic! Okay, just to make it clear, this isn't the super review I told you about, I have something special planned for that :p but I did want to leave a review of the first two chapters. I had some line by lines too, but unfortunately I ended up losing them so I'm just gonna do a general...