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Okay so....I actually read this two weeks ago and because of life taking a bit of a toll I couldn't sit down to do a proper review, but I had quotes and lines adn everything ready. Unfortunately, I kind of shot myself in the foot because I ended up letting too much time pass and now...I don't...

Okay, took a while but I'm back for chapter 15 and boy was this a different beast altogether. I really like how you always draw a contrast between what Natalie is going through to what Mark is going through. While Chapter 14 was long and embodied the feeling of being at a large party with people...

*is alive* Boy how time flies, it's been...a while since my last review in general and since I last read something in general. Life sucks sometimes, ya know. Also, I just realized you added a new chapter so uh...this review is for chapter 14 specifically, sorry. But anyways, I'm glad that I...

Well this is a review that's been a week in the making...I really gotta make these a lot quicker all things considered, but a lot happened during this last week. So I'll start this review by picking up where I left off since chapter 13 is the second part of the story that started back in...

Okay, I actually read this like five days ago but with life and all of tha thappening it's taken me this long to get to writing the review. I'm sorry >.< This chapter is both the longest so far and also the one that covers the most story. That being said, I think the chapter works especially...

I have to admit, I'm a bad reviewer. I read this chapter like three weeks ago and just kind of kept forgetting to review it. I'll be leaving my reviewing card on the way out. But seriously chapter 11 was such a big chapter, so many things happened in regards to character development and...

The plot thickens. Truth be told I'm still wondering what the whole thing with the Regis is going to add up to cause I know you wouldn't be showing us this if there wasn't going to be anything of it. So I like that there's this little supernatural plot developing in the background of the...

FIIIIIIIGGHHTHTTT I'm sorry, as much as I love super complex stories with really interesting characters and thought provoking themes...I can't resist a well written battle scene and you've just written one of the better battle scenes in a while. Mark and Natalie's "battle" is not only laid out...

I'm finally here! after three weeks of reading this fic, very very slowly thanks to real life happening, I'm finally caught up. It's actually kind of sad it's taken me this long considering it only has 8 chapters so far. Guess I was lucky it didn't have more yet. Anyways, my rambling aside...