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I actually meant to review both the prologue and the first chapter back there, but I didn't so here you go now I guess. I also liked the first chapter! I loved the interactions between Marni and Marshadow; it came off as absolutely precious, though I’m realizing that they don’t really have an...

I loved the prologue. I appreciate how you portrayed Marshadow coming into personhood (???). Marshadow came off as distinctly otherwordly, very different from a typical person, which is fitting since he's a Legendary. It's such an interesting perspective to start with. I look forward to how...