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    Pokémon Places We Call Home

    Chapter 15 Like with Chapter 14, I feel like the beginning of this chapter could have been condensed. Toshi volunteering and sparring with Whisper is a good catalyst for Haru to angst about her brother leaving, but I don't think we needed to explicitly see the volunteering happening. Maybe just...
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    Pokémon Places We Call Home

    Yay, back for the rest of the fic! I actually read and reviewed the bonus chapter and Ch 10 soon after posting my last review. Then something happened – I don’t remember – and I put it down for a couple months. But here I am again! Here are reviews for the rest of the published chapters: Bonus...
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    Pokémon Places We Call Home

    Hello, these are my thoughts on Places We Call Home up to Chapter 9. I was going to read and review the whole thing, but obviously this got pretty lengthy, and I decided I was better off making two reviews instead. This review is for the first part of the fic, but I read and wrote down my...
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