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Chapter 2 I enjoy this opening. It's characterization, but it's strong worldbuilding too: the idea that trading in a motorcycle for a Flying-type is even a thing for Odette to have never had the urge to do says a lot about the ubiquity of people traveling via Flying-type Pokémon. The fact she...

All right, I'm back for chapter one! I know sacrilege is a drug in this fic but "lethal amounts of sacrilege in his system" still sounds pretty hilarious :P No comma before when. But also, I thiiink you want to phrase this differently? I believe what you mean is she began to shake her head and...

An actual review for the prologue, after I read it and did some art for Smeargle Swap! Way too long because I cannot shut up but I hope it's illuminating. I'm a little confused by the "his own". Usually the "own" in a situation like this would be added to clarify which character is being...

Heya! I read the prologue for Smeargle Swap and attempted a Gulattive: No idea if that's at all close, but I hope you enjoy! What a messed-up little monster. Mini-review to go with it: big anime vibes! Very FMA. Mostly setup and intrigue; I'm interested in the boy and his messed-up memory...