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  1. Dragonfree

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Chapter 2 This is relying a bit too hard on the reader knowing Mystery Dungeon items off the top of their head, I feel, without really getting much out of keeping it hidden as far as I can tell. I'm assuming it's a Totter Seed, which Owen can use where he couldn't use a Totter Orb because the...
  2. Dragonfree

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Chapter 1 I enjoy this sentiment of darkness being a foreign concept. The phrasing of this feels a little contradictory. It says Amia is an exception to the population (presumably by not being a Fire-type), but also that she could deal with heat like any other Fire could, and the other implies...
  3. Dragonfree

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Hey, Namo! I'd written down partial reviews for the prologue and chapter one ages ago, so I think it's about time I actually got around to at the very least posting those. For now I reread the prologue and finished what I'd written before; should be able to get to chapter one tomorrow...
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