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  1. Dragonfree

    Pokémon Greenhorn Prometheus

    The first sentence seems to make sense at a glance, but only if you could put a comma after "In the massive estate" - that is, if this is mainly a sentence saying "the thunder and lightning were crackling over", and this happens to be happening in the estate. However, "crackling over" isn't...
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