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Chapter 7 This was a fun chapter! I have a vague memory of this, and even the recollection of you saying you'd had to research what a cruise ship's engine room looked like. This was certainly action-packed. Jade did a fantastic job of pulling herself together to run around and find all those...

Chapter 5 (Extra) The conversation between Jade and her mother felt very believable. It flowed well and was enjoyable to read. It sounds like Jade may get her licence in the future? The limits of not having one do seem very inconvenient. I'd never considered you'd need one just to use all the...

Reviewing Chapters 2-5 =D I'm currently making my way through this 'fic, and I'm really enjoying re-reading the earlier chapters! I love that battle aboard the plane, it has a lovely mix of excitement and comedy, as well as a sense of danger. And Pikachu is just so cute! I get the impression...

Ahh, it's nice to re-read this. I really want to continue this story, but I definitely need a re-cap. The prologue is really nice. I just love the descriptive style, and this paragraph is probably my favourite: It just really paints a picture. I don't recall reading much of Lugia originally...