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Chapter 12: Nice sensory detail with the chocolate chip cookies. It was interesting to see how things taste kind of similar to Gen in his new body, but not quite the same. That's something that I don't see mentioned a lot in stories where the protag gets transformed, so it was cool to see...

Chapter 11 Interesting that we're opening this one from Acacia's POV. We've heard a bit about how Saltriv had an uncle who was a hero, so it's good to get a little bit of his perspective on things. He's the most sensible link between the protagonists and the World-Savers' Council. I like how...

Back for the rest now! Chapter 6 The opening gives a pretty chilling look into the mind of a shadow Pokemon! Especially since it's one that we already know has been missing, so it was pretty inevitable that he'd turn out to have been shadowed. And hey, we've finally got our trio as an...

Chapter 2: It's interesting that we switched to a new narrator for this one! I actually wasn't expecting it at all, so it took me a few seconds to realize "oh! We're someone else now!" I'm of two minds about it--switching first person narrators can be kind of confusing since the pronouns don't...

Heya, I'll be back soon to read more chapters (in fact, I have an in-progress review for 2-4) I just wanted to get something out for the blitz, haha! Chapter 1: I really like the surreal imagery we're met with in the beginning. It's very striking and catches the reader's attention right away...