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  1. Chibi Pika

    Pokémon Heroes After All

    Chapter 7: Some really great, believable kid behavior here. :P I really like the tension you got out of slowly ruminating over this moment. A good instance where slowing things down really added something. This is a really great way to mask the fact that you hadn't come up with the name...
  2. Chibi Pika

    Pokémon Heroes After All

    I have returned! With chapters 4-6 this time~ Chapter 4: Given that we get to see what kind of damage all the other kids are doing, It's be neat to mention exactly what kind of damage he did. Ahh, makes sense that telepathy would be really useful for folks who can't speak, for whatever...
  3. Chibi Pika

    Pokémon Heroes After All

    Yooo, I've only been saying I'd review this for like, what, a year? Gah! Time to fix that: Chapter 1: Ooh, now there's a cool way to refer to the Ultimate Weapon firing. (Also I'm amused because my Rayquaza in PoGo is named Skybreaker.) He's... precious... Just a quick heads up, since I...
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