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Okay, fresh batch of reviews! Many thanks for the feedback, let's see what I can address now... I think that's more or less what I want to cover. I'm not sure whether I want to apply some of the non-grammatical fixes suggested for these chapters, because on one hand I'd like to iron out...

Chapter 2: Come Home with Me After finding and walking along a cobblestone path through the woods, Mona took me to a plain-looking wooden hovel, tucked away just within the treeline, as if hiding from the road. From the outside it didn’t look like much; it seemed sturdy enough, and I imagined...

Episode 1: The Edge of Dawn I woke from my dreamless sleep to a roaring chorus of rain, pounding rhythmically all around me as I shivered by myself. I didn’t need to open my eyes to know something was amiss. Cold, damp, drafty, basically the exact opposite of how I expect my bedroom to be in...