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Chapter 3: Success The day of painting has arrived, the sunny early morning contrasting how the painter herself is feeling. Rosa's chin touches the bottom of her neck. She's slumping in the Kalosian armchair. Today's when she starts painting, but what if onlookers jeer at her? What if she makes...

Thanks for the review! I'll make the necessary fixes and see what I can do regarding your other feedback :)

Thanks for pointing out the errors, and I'll see what I can do about that paragraph. Gladion doesn't show up, but he is friends with Valen and Rosa. Rui's from Colosseum, and I probably should've mentioned what the agency does too for better standalone power. It's actually an element from the...

Chapter 2: Teamwork Rosa's spending this late morning in the master bedroom, a frown appearing on her face. She eyes the antique bronze gilt clock within the middle bookshelf, feeling like its hands are moving as slow as possible. She got so caught up in the oil paintings that she forgot to...

Thanks for the feedback! I think I could remove the fan dialogue part but keep the interaction. And I'll make the other tweaks that you pointed out. They aren't actually kids, btw. That is a thing that I run into every now and them, so I should probably take a peek at that.

Rosa's Renaissance Rated: T Genres: Fluff, Slice of Life, Romance, Friendship and Humor Chapter 1: Commission Whether it's a dimly lit depiction of Kyogre that emphasizes its raw power or a vivid portrayal of a majestic landscape within Unova, the art of the Pokémon world has served as the...