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I HAVE RETURNED TO COMMENT AND ROAST DORIEN. I'm putting these two together because they both made me want a SWAT Team to storm in and take all those heartless jackasses down. You can't even blame Odette for losing it. I'm surprised she didn't kick this particular jackass in the family...

Here for catnip! Been meaning to catch up with this, so it's nice to get this for catnip And yes, reading is indeed essential. Shocker that it's coming from me, ain't it? Oh, this is nice! I love seeing this type of background lore. I also like how this family is using their power, wealth...

Need to get back to this! I love how you drop real people into your work left and right. When Hau show up 3000 years from the fic's present, I hope he's listentng to Afroman. I usually keep the name that historical figures most known by but change the others.(Da Vinci might be an exception...

Here for catnip, sorry for being late! I still really like your work, but reading can be hard for me :( First thing is first, I have something to say about Odette's mom: This mom is savage af, like damn lady chill tf out. This is your daughter, not the Kalosian battle rap scene. Dorien...

The Shiny Trade feels like it's shaping up to be a big role. It's a interesting, albeit rather dark take on Shiny Pokemon. I just made shinies range from confirmed to cryptid. 😅 Dorien's definitely fishy 👀

My bad, I have short term memory issues so I can miss things rather easily 😳😞 In any case, I like your work. I think the shiny trade could be a good plot point itself, but I feel like that’ll happen at some point.

I left a comment on CH 2 over at FFN, so I'll comment on 3 and 4. Overall, it's nice to be checking this out, since you've talked a lot about it. Chapter 3 |I'm glad to see that the police don't rely on civilians to do police work, unlike in canon games. That's why beyond maybe one or two...

I like the way the characters speak in the first chapter. It makes them sound more....royal? Does that make sense? Royalty is the vibe I get, and it feels like that's the intent here. Hopefully, I'm not too wrong! It got intense pretty quickly with the missing Pokemon, plus what happened to...