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Here for catnip! (I left a comment for Chapter 1 a little while back.) Oof, the feels. It hits differently when it's a Pokemon involved, as anime episodes like Bye Bye Butterfree has shown. Another hit to the feels, and I like your characterization of Ibuki/Clair overall. That uncle needs to...

I like the focus on Lance. As with many canon characters, he's not exactly developed. I don't mind the Japanese names, tbh. I use English names, but I understand where you're coming from. Descriptive writing's on point. Descriptive writing's on point throughout the first chapter. Looks like...