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Actually I'm a little curious as to your conclusion, because my goal honestly *wasn't* to make the reader feel sorry for Rose. So if it fails in that, it never intended to do so.

Oh it wasn't "partner" that Rose interpreted as himself, it was "Cha--". I feel like SwSh would have been way better if they had leaned into the fairy tale aspect of things. I mean, Bede straight up got taken away by the leader of the fairies and we're not gonna say anything about that? Rose...

Haha I'm glad you liked that line. My favorite is the "you lost--" "No, all of Galar won" "--your damn mind" part. And even I'm not sure who Leon was addressing with "cha--". I'm terrible at writing battles and I feel like that would have detracted from the story. It's uh...not my strong suit...

When I was young, I wanted to be a noble knight, the sort you read about in storybooks. A stick as a sword and a discarded plank as a shield, I would scout the area for any evils to defeat. Anything that could threaten Galar, anything at all, needed to be defeated, after all. That was the role...